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Great parody!

What sold it to me were the points that kept popping up every time he made a hit. This was funny as hell, and I definately laughed. I hope you have some more ideas for this.

DarkDisguise responds:

Thank you!!!!
Your very kind all of you ho says these fine words!
Thank you!
my goal is to become the greatest movie or comic maker in the world!
bye Cheshirepus! have a good day!

There were some things holding this back.

This movie was pretty damn good as far as I'm concerned, but it sort of fell apart at the end when the music stopped... It had a feeling that it kind of dragged on a little longer than it should have. But, that's a minor problem when compared to your ability to animate with Flash. Also, try to compress your music a lot more than you did since there's no reason for this to be over 5 Megs. I think this movie's great, and it actually had a pleasant feeling to it with the ending.
Congratulations on your happiness with her, by the way.

DarkDisguise responds:

Hi!!!
Your so nice that i could cry.
Na not really cry but thanks for all.
Well that with the music was a mistake and compressing why do you recomend so i don't really get it?
and by the way, sorry but my girlfriend left me for a couple of weeks ago,
sad but so is life.
Catch ya later pal!!! :D

That was some great animation.

What little animation you had there was truly great, indeed! I definately look forward to your finished version of it. What I didn't really care for though was that it seemed more like an advertisement to your website than anything else. Still, it was good none the less, and if you have a completed version or are working on one, please submit it here.
Great work!

I remember submitting something like this once.

I did one about a fighter pilot and a C-130 pilot, but it ended up getting Blammed. I apprectiate your style in making a joke into a Flash movie and hope this makes it past judgement since it's a fairly decent punchline, though a bit goofy!

Damn, that was funny!

You must be in the Army, because that's exactly how it was when I got to Ft. Knox last summer. I wished it was a lot longer, though. Still, it was funny as hell. Especially when he turned into a clone after his hair was cut. Only two kinds of people at Basic... There're those with BCG's and those without!

Livecorpse responds:

Ya buddy, fort jackson, 2000. I kinda , "got out" after 4 months, but hey at least i tired.
Fort knox is a bitch, dude. infantry would be too hard for me, for sure.

Fucking clocks and locks! It's getting OLD!

No plot, no storyline, unfinished, and it's part of the tired old clock/lock/and now even muffin bullshit. Until I actually see something new happen with this crap, I'm going to start blamming every clock and lock I see, god damnit!
Your animation and sound sync was good, though... But for the love of god! Grrrr.

It's just been done too much already.

The sound complimented the movie really well, but the animation kind of sucked. Maybe it was because you based it on characters that weren't drawn worth crap in the first place. Your replay button needs to be worked on. I don't like having to place my cursor directly on a thin line of the word "Replay" to touch the button. And what the hell was up with the little blue guy in the window?

Its like hearing the same joke over and over again

I enjoyed the music, and it was actually entertaining because it wasn't just another dumb ass clock movie, but the fact remains the same... These clock, lock, muffin, whatever, series are getting lame.

You shot yourself in the foot with the clown.

I have to echo what everyone else is thinking about this... Why on earth would someone who's capable of creating something so good completely fuck it up with a clown with it's dick out. Were you working on this on a public computer and forget to close your document when you left so that a 13 year old in puberty had the opportunity to finish it for you?
I'm sorry, I gave you a 10 for the graphics in the beginning because they truly are great, but the clown... BLAM!

Testerline responds:

I am going to let you in on a little secret. Those graphics before the amazing clown were made using a simple program i downloaded. All i had to do was punch in some numbers and it did all the work. This flash is a joke. It served it purpose verywell because these reviews are helarious to read.

Nothing groundbreaking, but still really good.

Music and use of sprites was impressive, but the story was a little boring. Maybe that's because this is only the beginning of it? Well, I look forward to the next part anyway. Good job.

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